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Overcoming a Writer's Biggest Fear—Marketing and Promotion / DiAnn Mills
How do you eat an elephant? One bite at a time, or so the saying goes. And for writers, there aren’t many elephant-sized responsibilities more disheartening than the modern-day must of self-promotion. Here to break down the timeline of a standard marketing campaign is this week’s guest blogger DiAnn Mills. She’s already cut your food up for you, authors. It’d be a shame if you left it sitting there.
Happy reading!
Clay Stafford
Founder Killer Nashville
Publisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Overcoming a Writer’s Biggest Fear—Marketing and Promotion
By DiAnn Mills
We writers embrace words, brainstorming sessions, hours of writing, and constructive criticism, but there is one critical aspect of the writer’s life that shakes us to our core...
Marketing and Promotion:
The nightmare of our career.
We think we have the notion,
But can’t move past the fear.
Okay, I’m not a poet—I write suspense. But I’m sure you understand where this is going. We writers must market and promote our stories and our brand. No running or hiding. It’s necessary if we are to be successful in placing our novels into the hearts and hands of readers. So let’s crawl out of our cave mode and discuss ways to approach the scary monster called marketing and promotion. I think you’ll find it can be easy and even enjoyable.
Number one on the list is creating an outstanding book, the kind of suspense novel that marches through the graveyard of those who’ve failed to promote, wielding determination and the sword of skill.
Number two is having an active presence on a highly read blog (yours or a group site), Facebook, and Twitter. We writers deepen our brands through social media to leave a positive image that oozes with professionalism.
Those are the basics. Now this next section of information makes novel promotion simple. I’m a firm believer in organization, and when I write a novel, spreadsheets keep me rooted in reality.
After we sign a contract with a publisher or decide when a novel will be published, the work hovers over us. A writer gets ahead of the marketing and promotion stress by developing a Timeline Task countdown. This is an indicator of what needs to be accomplished approximately a year before a book is released. Some logistics vary depending on whether you are traditionally published or not, but this will give you an idea for creating your own Timeline Task spreadsheet.
12 months out:
Contact online and print publications to arrange for ad and banner placement. Make sure they are in place for the month of the book release.
Recruit your Street Team.
Reach out to prominent authors in your genre for possible endorsements. This allows the endorser to schedule reading the novel.
Write blogs that connect to the novel. Stockpile them—you will be glad later.
9 months out:
Order bookmarks and postcards.
Arrange guest blogs and schedule in your calendar when they will appear. Remember, these have already been written.
Arrange production of book trailer.
Arrange production of author interview video.
Announce to Street Team and brainstorm promo ideas.
6 months out:
Contact TV and radio stations for interviews.
Create contest ideas with giveaways.
Goodreads: update bio, headshot, ask-the-author section, add new release to books, link to blog posts, update page; be active! http://www.goodreads.com/author/guidelines
Design secret Pinterest Boards.
Use postcards to notify libraries of new book
3 months out:
Mail ARCs.
Keep Street Team posted.
Confirm all blog spots, ads, banners, etc.
Seek events to speak and sign.
Check that all online platforms and retail stores have updated bio and photo.
Arrange launch party or signing for big day.
6 weeks out:
Mail author copies or e-copies of book to Street Team.
Mail author copies or e-copies of book to reviewers.
Encourage pre-orders.
Post book trailer and author interviews.
Book release:
E-mail blast
Blogs appear
Constant presence on social media platforms.
Thank those who helped make the release a success.
Small tokens of thanks sent.
Contests announced.
Follow up:
Keep the momentum going by sharing deleted scenes, research, character insight, and behind-the-scenes action.
Party time!
All of the above is fairly easy. But we don’t have time to fashion all those social media posts at a moment’s notice. Here is where a Proactive Marketing and Promotion spreadsheet is used. By using this aid during the proposal and writing phase, a writer keeps her sanity and confidence intact.
At the completion of each scene, fill in a row that contains columns for the following:
Scene #
Blog Ideas
Contest Ideas
Facebook Post
Giveaways
Hashtags
Pinterest Board Ideas
Speaking Topics
Tweetables
Video Ideas
Other/Misc
I recommend keeping track of the various blog sites, the contact person, e-mail address, word length, website, date contacted, date due, date e-mailed, date when the blog appears, and a comment section. The last one is helpful if a giveaway is offered or particular specs needed for the post.
Marketing and promotion organization begins when the idea for a fabulous book enters our minds. As we imagine plot, characters, setting, research, and dialogue, we also envision how our book will reach readers. What is your favorite method of enticing readers?
DiAnn Mills is a bestselling author who believes her readers should expect an adventure. She combines unforgettable characters with unpredictable plots to create action-packed, suspense-filled novels. Her titles have appeared on the CBA and ECPA bestseller lists, won two Christy Awards, and been finalists for the RITA, Daphne Du Maurier, Inspirational Readers’ Choice, and Carol award contests. Library Journal presented her with a Best Books 2014: Genre Fiction award in the Christian Fiction category for Firewall.
DiAnn is a founding board member of the American Christian Fiction Writers; a member of Advanced Writers and Speakers Association, International Thriller Writers, and the Faith, Hope, and Love chapter of Romance Writers of America. She is co-director of The Author Roadmap with social media specialist Edie Melson where she continues her passion of helping other writers be successful. She speaks to various groups and teaches writing workshops around the country. DiAnn has been termed a coffee snob and roasts her own coffee beans.
She’s an avid reader, loves to cook, and believes her grandchildren are the smartest kids in the universe. She and her husband live in sunny Houston, Texas. DiAnn is very active online and would love to connect with readers on any of the social media platforms listed at www.diannmills.com.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Overcoming a Writer's Biggest Fear—Marketing and Promotion / DiAnn Mills
How do you eat an elephant? One bite at a time, or so the saying goes. And for writers, there aren’t many elephant-sized responsibilities more disheartening than the modern-day must of self-promotion. Here to break down the timeline of a standard marketing campaign is this week’s guest blogger DiAnn Mills. She’s already cut your food up for you, authors. It’d be a shame if you left it sitting there.Happy reading!
Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Overcoming a Writer’s Biggest Fear—Marketing and Promotion
By DiAnn Mills
We writers embrace words, brainstorming sessions, hours of writing, and constructive criticism, but there is one critical aspect of the writer’s life that shakes us to our core...
Marketing and Promotion:
The nightmare of our career.
We think we have the notion,
But can’t move past the fear.
Okay, I’m not a poet—I write suspense. But I’m sure you understand where this is going. We writers must market and promote our stories and our brand. No running or hiding. It’s necessary if we are to be successful in placing our novels into the hearts and hands of readers. So let’s crawl out of our cave mode and discuss ways to approach the scary monster called marketing and promotion. I think you’ll find it can be easy and even enjoyable.
Number one on the list is creating an outstanding book, the kind of suspense novel that marches through the graveyard of those who’ve failed to promote, wielding determination and the sword of skill.
Number two is having an active presence on a highly read blog (yours or a group site), Facebook, and Twitter. We writers deepen our brands through social media to leave a positive image that oozes with professionalism.
Those are the basics. Now this next section of information makes novel promotion simple. I’m a firm believer in organization, and when I write a novel, spreadsheets keep me rooted in reality.
After we sign a contract with a publisher or decide when a novel will be published, the work hovers over us. A writer gets ahead of the marketing and promotion stress by developing a Timeline Task countdown. This is an indicator of what needs to be accomplished approximately a year before a book is released. Some logistics vary depending on whether you are traditionally published or not, but this will give you an idea for creating your own Timeline Task spreadsheet.
12 months out:
- Contact online and print publications to arrange for ad and banner placement. Make sure they are in place for the month of the book release.
- Recruit your Street Team.
- Reach out to prominent authors in your genre for possible endorsements. This allows the endorser to schedule reading the novel.
- Write blogs that connect to the novel. Stockpile them—you will be glad later.
9 months out:
- Order bookmarks and postcards.
- Arrange guest blogs and schedule in your calendar when they will appear. Remember, these have already been written.
- Arrange production of book trailer.
- Arrange production of author interview video.
- Announce to Street Team and brainstorm promo ideas.
6 months out:
- Contact TV and radio stations for interviews.
- Create contest ideas with giveaways.
- Goodreads: update bio, headshot, ask-the-author section, add new release to books, link to blog posts, update page; be active! http://www.goodreads.com/author/guidelines
- Design secret Pinterest Boards.
- Use postcards to notify libraries of new book
3 months out:
- Mail ARCs.
- Keep Street Team posted.
- Confirm all blog spots, ads, banners, etc.
- Seek events to speak and sign.
- Check that all online platforms and retail stores have updated bio and photo.
- Arrange launch party or signing for big day.
6 weeks out:
- Mail author copies or e-copies of book to Street Team.
- Mail author copies or e-copies of book to reviewers.
- Encourage pre-orders.
- Post book trailer and author interviews.
Book release:
- E-mail blast
- Blogs appear
- Constant presence on social media platforms.
- Thank those who helped make the release a success.
- Small tokens of thanks sent.
- Contests announced.
Follow up:
- Keep the momentum going by sharing deleted scenes, research, character insight, and behind-the-scenes action.
- Party time!
All of the above is fairly easy. But we don’t have time to fashion all those social media posts at a moment’s notice. Here is where a Proactive Marketing and Promotion spreadsheet is used. By using this aid during the proposal and writing phase, a writer keeps her sanity and confidence intact.
At the completion of each scene, fill in a row that contains columns for the following:
Scene #
Blog Ideas
Contest Ideas
Facebook Post
Giveaways
Hashtags
Pinterest Board Ideas
Speaking Topics
Tweetables
Video Ideas
Other/Misc
I recommend keeping track of the various blog sites, the contact person, e-mail address, word length, website, date contacted, date due, date e-mailed, date when the blog appears, and a comment section. The last one is helpful if a giveaway is offered or particular specs needed for the post.
Marketing and promotion organization begins when the idea for a fabulous book enters our minds. As we imagine plot, characters, setting, research, and dialogue, we also envision how our book will reach readers. What is your favorite method of enticing readers?
DiAnn Mills is a bestselling author who believes her readers should expect an adventure. She combines unforgettable characters with unpredictable plots to create action-packed, suspense-filled novels. Her titles have appeared on the CBA and ECPA bestseller lists, won two Christy Awards, and been finalists for the RITA, Daphne Du Maurier, Inspirational Readers’ Choice, and Carol award contests. Library Journal presented her with a Best Books 2014: Genre Fiction award in the Christian Fiction category for Firewall.
DiAnn is a founding board member of the American Christian Fiction Writers; a member of Advanced Writers and Speakers Association, International Thriller Writers, and the Faith, Hope, and Love chapter of Romance Writers of America. She is co-director of The Author Roadmap with social media specialist Edie Melson where she continues her passion of helping other writers be successful. She speaks to various groups and teaches writing workshops around the country. DiAnn has been termed a coffee snob and roasts her own coffee beans.
She’s an avid reader, loves to cook, and believes her grandchildren are the smartest kids in the universe. She and her husband live in sunny Houston, Texas. DiAnn is very active online and would love to connect with readers on any of the social media platforms listed at www.diannmills.com.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Overcoming a Writer's Biggest Fear—Marketing and Promotion / DiAnn Mills
How do you eat an elephant? One bite at a time, or so the saying goes. And for writers, there aren’t many elephant-sized responsibilities more disheartening than the modern-day must of self-promotion. Here to break down the timeline of a standard marketing campaign is this week’s guest blogger DiAnn Mills. She’s already cut your food up for you, authors. It’d be a shame if you left it sitting there.Happy reading!
Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Overcoming a Writer’s Biggest Fear—Marketing and Promotion
By DiAnn Mills
We writers embrace words, brainstorming sessions, hours of writing, and constructive criticism, but there is one critical aspect of the writer’s life that shakes us to our core...
Marketing and Promotion:
The nightmare of our career.
We think we have the notion,
But can’t move past the fear.
Okay, I’m not a poet—I write suspense. But I’m sure you understand where this is going. We writers must market and promote our stories and our brand. No running or hiding. It’s necessary if we are to be successful in placing our novels into the hearts and hands of readers. So let’s crawl out of our cave mode and discuss ways to approach the scary monster called marketing and promotion. I think you’ll find it can be easy and even enjoyable.
Number one on the list is creating an outstanding book, the kind of suspense novel that marches through the graveyard of those who’ve failed to promote, wielding determination and the sword of skill.
Number two is having an active presence on a highly read blog (yours or a group site), Facebook, and Twitter. We writers deepen our brands through social media to leave a positive image that oozes with professionalism.
Those are the basics. Now this next section of information makes novel promotion simple. I’m a firm believer in organization, and when I write a novel, spreadsheets keep me rooted in reality.
After we sign a contract with a publisher or decide when a novel will be published, the work hovers over us. A writer gets ahead of the marketing and promotion stress by developing a Timeline Task countdown. This is an indicator of what needs to be accomplished approximately a year before a book is released. Some logistics vary depending on whether you are traditionally published or not, but this will give you an idea for creating your own Timeline Task spreadsheet.
12 months out:
- Contact online and print publications to arrange for ad and banner placement. Make sure they are in place for the month of the book release.
- Recruit your Street Team.
- Reach out to prominent authors in your genre for possible endorsements. This allows the endorser to schedule reading the novel.
- Write blogs that connect to the novel. Stockpile them—you will be glad later.
9 months out:
- Order bookmarks and postcards.
- Arrange guest blogs and schedule in your calendar when they will appear. Remember, these have already been written.
- Arrange production of book trailer.
- Arrange production of author interview video.
- Announce to Street Team and brainstorm promo ideas.
6 months out:
- Contact TV and radio stations for interviews.
- Create contest ideas with giveaways.
- Goodreads: update bio, headshot, ask-the-author section, add new release to books, link to blog posts, update page; be active! http://www.goodreads.com/author/guidelines
- Design secret Pinterest Boards.
- Use postcards to notify libraries of new book
3 months out:
- Mail ARCs.
- Keep Street Team posted.
- Confirm all blog spots, ads, banners, etc.
- Seek events to speak and sign.
- Check that all online platforms and retail stores have updated bio and photo.
- Arrange launch party or signing for big day.
6 weeks out:
- Mail author copies or e-copies of book to Street Team.
- Mail author copies or e-copies of book to reviewers.
- Encourage pre-orders.
- Post book trailer and author interviews.
Book release:
- E-mail blast
- Blogs appear
- Constant presence on social media platforms.
- Thank those who helped make the release a success.
- Small tokens of thanks sent.
- Contests announced.
Follow up:
- Keep the momentum going by sharing deleted scenes, research, character insight, and behind-the-scenes action.
- Party time!
All of the above is fairly easy. But we don’t have time to fashion all those social media posts at a moment’s notice. Here is where a Proactive Marketing and Promotion spreadsheet is used. By using this aid during the proposal and writing phase, a writer keeps her sanity and confidence intact.
At the completion of each scene, fill in a row that contains columns for the following:
Scene #
Blog Ideas
Contest Ideas
Facebook Post
Giveaways
Hashtags
Pinterest Board Ideas
Speaking Topics
Tweetables
Video Ideas
Other/Misc
I recommend keeping track of the various blog sites, the contact person, e-mail address, word length, website, date contacted, date due, date e-mailed, date when the blog appears, and a comment section. The last one is helpful if a giveaway is offered or particular specs needed for the post.
Marketing and promotion organization begins when the idea for a fabulous book enters our minds. As we imagine plot, characters, setting, research, and dialogue, we also envision how our book will reach readers. What is your favorite method of enticing readers?
DiAnn Mills is a bestselling author who believes her readers should expect an adventure. She combines unforgettable characters with unpredictable plots to create action-packed, suspense-filled novels. Her titles have appeared on the CBA and ECPA bestseller lists, won two Christy Awards, and been finalists for the RITA, Daphne Du Maurier, Inspirational Readers’ Choice, and Carol award contests. Library Journal presented her with a Best Books 2014: Genre Fiction award in the Christian Fiction category for Firewall.
DiAnn is a founding board member of the American Christian Fiction Writers; a member of Advanced Writers and Speakers Association, International Thriller Writers, and the Faith, Hope, and Love chapter of Romance Writers of America. She is co-director of The Author Roadmap with social media specialist Edie Melson where she continues her passion of helping other writers be successful. She speaks to various groups and teaches writing workshops around the country. DiAnn has been termed a coffee snob and roasts her own coffee beans.
She’s an avid reader, loves to cook, and believes her grandchildren are the smartest kids in the universe. She and her husband live in sunny Houston, Texas. DiAnn is very active online and would love to connect with readers on any of the social media platforms listed at www.diannmills.com.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Honk If You Love Stories / Robert Mangeot
A universal formula for the perfect story doesn’t exist. If it did, we’d all be billionaires with a library full of bestsellers apiece—or, perhaps, no one would. But there are critical elements that we must include to give our stories what they need. J. B. Manas’s post a few weeks ago broke several successful thrillers down into three key ingredients. Robert Mangeot’s blog this week continues the conversation on story mechanics with an ambitious single-engine approach.
Happy reading!
Clay Stafford
Founder Killer Nashville
Publisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
HONK IF YOU LOVE STORIES
by Robert Mangeot
Some would call it a bold claim, condensing millennia of storytelling power and purpose into a single word. Seriously, one lousy word for why some stories get retold around the campfire and on the page while others… well, not so much? Yes, only the too-bold would go bumper sticker on so rich a history, which is why I’m too-boldly saying the word rhymes with conch.
Honk.
As in honking. A Big Honking Moment, separating the great and memorable stories from the merely good.
Hang on a second. I don’t mean a story must end in a shoot-out or go purple with melodrama. In fact, the best BHMs may be understated, even fleeting. I mean a pitch-perfect moment, where the lens flips inward and something is lost or gained, and every element that came before gels into a wallop of truth.
Here’s a test: read start-to-finish a few stories by acknowledged masters. Somewhere at or near the end of each piece, I promise, will be a resonant burst the author has driven us toward. With Conan Doyle’s “A Scandal in Bohemia”, it is Holmes asking for a photo of Irene Adler, knowing she has bested him. In Poe’s “The Tell-Tale Heart”, the insane narrator’s dementia finally hounds him into revealing the corpse. Other BHMs might be uplifting, bleak, funny, lyrical, brutal. A whiplash twist or the doom we’ve seen coming from Jump Street.
Which should not confuse a story’s BHM with its climax. Smarter people than I—say, those that don’t use big and honking as terms of literary analysis—define a climax as the height of action. Action, as in when the struggle against external forces is most intense. Our heroine or hero will win or lose that struggle, and from thence comes the internal. Consequences. Knowledge. Newfound strength or sudden regret. If the climax is the height of action, the BHM that follows is the height of resonance.
Take Flannery O’Connor’s “A Good Man Is Hard to Find”. To oversimplify genius, it is the story of an unlikeable grandmother who manipulates a family road trip into the one she prefers. Her conflicting duplicity and jumbled sense of personal goodness leads to a really unfortunate decision of country lane and a life-but-mostly-death situation. The slam-bang climax, 22 of 23 pages in, is the grandmother’s murder. The BHM slithers into the last few paragraphs, where her killer, the Misfit, then holds forth on life. Without O’Connor grounding things there, her painstaking build-up floats away disconnected, and the murder loses its intended point about morality and moral codes. Too smart for that, O’Connor constructed a moment so honking that it crackles sixty years after first publication.
If a BHM makes or breaks a memorable story, how does one honk up a manuscript? A few lessons learned the hard way:
1. Be intentional.
I’ve come to think of short stories as ending delivery mechanisms. A BHM at the close turns a solid piece into a fiction cruise missile armed with a major warhead. Simply being conscious of a BHM’s potential in the planning stages makes finding one more likely.
2. More is not more.
If one BHM makes a great story, then two or three must be awesomeness itself, right? Wrong. A story has its natural lifts, but only one of them can be the highest. That’s the one to focus on; too much honking risks imbalance and over-emotional noise.
3. Stop the clock.
The BHM marks when the main conflict and character shifts are over. There may be further events to resolve or consolidate things, but after the BHM, a story is all about the finish.
4. Thread it through.
BHMs may arrive by inspiration, but ultimately they are built through sentence-by-sentence lead-up, from the opening passage. The BHM ties up every narrative and character thread that came before into a unified whole. It’s not too bold to guess any loose threads are darlings, and like any darlings, they need to meet your Inner Misfit.
So, if you’re interested in pumping up your storytelling, do what the best storytellers have done for millennia: honk. Bring us a big and honking moment of truth. Make it anything from the subtlest whisper to the hardest hammer blow, anything that delivers the relatable jolt we other folks around the fire came to hear—and to hold onto.
Robert Mangeot lives in Nashville and is the current chapter Vice President for Sisters in Crime Middle Tennessee. His short fiction appears in various anthologies and journals, including Lowestoft Chronicle, Murder Under the Oaks, Mysterical-E, and Mystery Writers of America PresentsIce Cold: Tales of Intrigue from the Cold War. His work has won contests sponsored by the Chattanooga Writers’ Guild, On the Premises, and Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers. His third story for Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine hits newsstands March 2016. Learn more about his writing and his wandering the snack food aisles. Find more of his work at www.robertmangeot.com.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Honk If You Love Stories / Robert Mangeot
A universal formula for the perfect story doesn’t exist. If it did, we’d all be billionaires with a library full of bestsellers apiece—or, perhaps, no one would. But there are critical elements that we must include to give our stories what they need. J. B. Manas’s post a few weeks ago broke several successful thrillers down into three key ingredients. Robert Mangeot’s blog this week continues the conversation on story mechanics with an ambitious single-engine approach.
Happy reading!
Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
HONK IF YOU LOVE STORIES
by Robert Mangeot
Some would call it a bold claim, condensing millennia of storytelling power and purpose into a single word. Seriously, one lousy word for why some stories get retold around the campfire and on the page while others… well, not so much? Yes, only the too-bold would go bumper sticker on so rich a history, which is why I’m too-boldly saying the word rhymes with conch.
Honk.
As in honking. A Big Honking Moment, separating the great and memorable stories from the merely good.
Hang on a second. I don’t mean a story must end in a shoot-out or go purple with melodrama. In fact, the best BHMs may be understated, even fleeting. I mean a pitch-perfect moment, where the lens flips inward and something is lost or gained, and every element that came before gels into a wallop of truth.
Here’s a test: read start-to-finish a few stories by acknowledged masters. Somewhere at or near the end of each piece, I promise, will be a resonant burst the author has driven us toward. With Conan Doyle’s “A Scandal in Bohemia”, it is Holmes asking for a photo of Irene Adler, knowing she has bested him. In Poe’s “The Tell-Tale Heart”, the insane narrator’s dementia finally hounds him into revealing the corpse. Other BHMs might be uplifting, bleak, funny, lyrical, brutal. A whiplash twist or the doom we’ve seen coming from Jump Street.
Which should not confuse a story’s BHM with its climax. Smarter people than I—say, those that don’t use big and honking as terms of literary analysis—define a climax as the height of action. Action, as in when the struggle against external forces is most intense. Our heroine or hero will win or lose that struggle, and from thence comes the internal. Consequences. Knowledge. Newfound strength or sudden regret. If the climax is the height of action, the BHM that follows is the height of resonance.
Take Flannery O’Connor’s “A Good Man Is Hard to Find”. To oversimplify genius, it is the story of an unlikeable grandmother who manipulates a family road trip into the one she prefers. Her conflicting duplicity and jumbled sense of personal goodness leads to a really unfortunate decision of country lane and a life-but-mostly-death situation. The slam-bang climax, 22 of 23 pages in, is the grandmother’s murder. The BHM slithers into the last few paragraphs, where her killer, the Misfit, then holds forth on life. Without O’Connor grounding things there, her painstaking build-up floats away disconnected, and the murder loses its intended point about morality and moral codes. Too smart for that, O’Connor constructed a moment so honking that it crackles sixty years after first publication.
If a BHM makes or breaks a memorable story, how does one honk up a manuscript? A few lessons learned the hard way:
1. Be intentional.
I’ve come to think of short stories as ending delivery mechanisms. A BHM at the close turns a solid piece into a fiction cruise missile armed with a major warhead. Simply being conscious of a BHM’s potential in the planning stages makes finding one more likely.
2. More is not more.
If one BHM makes a great story, then two or three must be awesomeness itself, right? Wrong. A story has its natural lifts, but only one of them can be the highest. That’s the one to focus on; too much honking risks imbalance and over-emotional noise.
3. Stop the clock.
The BHM marks when the main conflict and character shifts are over. There may be further events to resolve or consolidate things, but after the BHM, a story is all about the finish.
4. Thread it through.
BHMs may arrive by inspiration, but ultimately they are built through sentence-by-sentence lead-up, from the opening passage. The BHM ties up every narrative and character thread that came before into a unified whole. It’s not too bold to guess any loose threads are darlings, and like any darlings, they need to meet your Inner Misfit.
So, if you’re interested in pumping up your storytelling, do what the best storytellers have done for millennia: honk. Bring us a big and honking moment of truth. Make it anything from the subtlest whisper to the hardest hammer blow, anything that delivers the relatable jolt we other folks around the fire came to hear—and to hold onto.
Robert Mangeot lives in Nashville and is the current chapter Vice President for Sisters in Crime Middle Tennessee. His short fiction appears in various anthologies and journals, including Lowestoft Chronicle, Murder Under the Oaks, Mysterical-E, and Mystery Writers of America Presents Ice Cold: Tales of Intrigue from the Cold War. His work has won contests sponsored by the Chattanooga Writers’ Guild, On the Premises, and Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers. His third story for Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine hits newsstands March 2016. Learn more about his writing and his wandering the snack food aisles. Find more of his work at www.robertmangeot.com.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Honk If You Love Stories / Robert Mangeot
A universal formula for the perfect story doesn’t exist. If it did, we’d all be billionaires with a library full of bestsellers apiece—or, perhaps, no one would. But there are critical elements that we must include to give our stories what they need. J. B. Manas’s post a few weeks ago broke several successful thrillers down into three key ingredients. Robert Mangeot’s blog this week continues the conversation on story mechanics with an ambitious single-engine approach.
Happy reading!
Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
HONK IF YOU LOVE STORIES
by Robert Mangeot
Some would call it a bold claim, condensing millennia of storytelling power and purpose into a single word. Seriously, one lousy word for why some stories get retold around the campfire and on the page while others… well, not so much? Yes, only the too-bold would go bumper sticker on so rich a history, which is why I’m too-boldly saying the word rhymes with conch.
Honk.
As in honking. A Big Honking Moment, separating the great and memorable stories from the merely good.
Hang on a second. I don’t mean a story must end in a shoot-out or go purple with melodrama. In fact, the best BHMs may be understated, even fleeting. I mean a pitch-perfect moment, where the lens flips inward and something is lost or gained, and every element that came before gels into a wallop of truth.
Here’s a test: read start-to-finish a few stories by acknowledged masters. Somewhere at or near the end of each piece, I promise, will be a resonant burst the author has driven us toward. With Conan Doyle’s “A Scandal in Bohemia”, it is Holmes asking for a photo of Irene Adler, knowing she has bested him. In Poe’s “The Tell-Tale Heart”, the insane narrator’s dementia finally hounds him into revealing the corpse. Other BHMs might be uplifting, bleak, funny, lyrical, brutal. A whiplash twist or the doom we’ve seen coming from Jump Street.
Which should not confuse a story’s BHM with its climax. Smarter people than I—say, those that don’t use big and honking as terms of literary analysis—define a climax as the height of action. Action, as in when the struggle against external forces is most intense. Our heroine or hero will win or lose that struggle, and from thence comes the internal. Consequences. Knowledge. Newfound strength or sudden regret. If the climax is the height of action, the BHM that follows is the height of resonance.
Take Flannery O’Connor’s “A Good Man Is Hard to Find”. To oversimplify genius, it is the story of an unlikeable grandmother who manipulates a family road trip into the one she prefers. Her conflicting duplicity and jumbled sense of personal goodness leads to a really unfortunate decision of country lane and a life-but-mostly-death situation. The slam-bang climax, 22 of 23 pages in, is the grandmother’s murder. The BHM slithers into the last few paragraphs, where her killer, the Misfit, then holds forth on life. Without O’Connor grounding things there, her painstaking build-up floats away disconnected, and the murder loses its intended point about morality and moral codes. Too smart for that, O’Connor constructed a moment so honking that it crackles sixty years after first publication.
If a BHM makes or breaks a memorable story, how does one honk up a manuscript? A few lessons learned the hard way:
1. Be intentional.
I’ve come to think of short stories as ending delivery mechanisms. A BHM at the close turns a solid piece into a fiction cruise missile armed with a major warhead. Simply being conscious of a BHM’s potential in the planning stages makes finding one more likely.
2. More is not more.
If one BHM makes a great story, then two or three must be awesomeness itself, right? Wrong. A story has its natural lifts, but only one of them can be the highest. That’s the one to focus on; too much honking risks imbalance and over-emotional noise.
3. Stop the clock.
The BHM marks when the main conflict and character shifts are over. There may be further events to resolve or consolidate things, but after the BHM, a story is all about the finish.
4. Thread it through.
BHMs may arrive by inspiration, but ultimately they are built through sentence-by-sentence lead-up, from the opening passage. The BHM ties up every narrative and character thread that came before into a unified whole. It’s not too bold to guess any loose threads are darlings, and like any darlings, they need to meet your Inner Misfit.
So, if you’re interested in pumping up your storytelling, do what the best storytellers have done for millennia: honk. Bring us a big and honking moment of truth. Make it anything from the subtlest whisper to the hardest hammer blow, anything that delivers the relatable jolt we other folks around the fire came to hear—and to hold onto.
Robert Mangeot lives in Nashville and is the current chapter Vice President for Sisters in Crime Middle Tennessee. His short fiction appears in various anthologies and journals, including Lowestoft Chronicle, Murder Under the Oaks, Mysterical-E, and Mystery Writers of America Presents Ice Cold: Tales of Intrigue from the Cold War. His work has won contests sponsored by the Chattanooga Writers’ Guild, On the Premises, and Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers. His third story for Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine hits newsstands March 2016. Learn more about his writing and his wandering the snack food aisles. Find more of his work at www.robertmangeot.com.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Give "Go Set A Watchman" Its Due / Blake Fontenay
In the month since the passing of legendary American author Harper Lee, we have seen a great deal of turmoil, as a nation and as a world. Political unrest and racial tension continue to plague our society to this day, reminding us of the importance of books like To Kill A Mockingbird, which inspire us all to take a stand for what is right.
For many of her fans, Ms. Lee’s controversial Go Set A Watchman failed to live up to the moral caliber of To Kill A Mockingbird, but, as former journalist and Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded author Blake Fontenay examines in this week’s guest blog, there’s important and relevant inspiration to be found in Go Set A Watchman, as well.
Happy reading!
Clay Stafford
Founder Killer Nashville
Publisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Give Go Set A Watchman Its Due
By Blake Fontenay
(Spoiler Alert: If you haven’t yet read Go Set A Watchman but intend to, don’t look at this post until you have.)
When the news broke that a “new” Harper Lee novel had been discovered and was slated for publication, I remember what an uproar it caused.
There were some who worried that the book, Go Set A Watchman, would somehow tarnish the legacy Ms. Lee created for herself when she wrote her Pulitzer Prize-winning novel, To Kill A Mockingbird.
Since Ms. Lee’s passing on Feb. 19, I’ve been reflecting on that concern.
First of all, I believe Ms. Lee’s legacy is safe, on the strength of To Kill A Mockingbird alone. Unless we find out later that she was using the literary equivalent of steroids when she wrote that classic, I think her status as a hall of famer is assured.
Having said that, I would also add that I don’t think Go Set A Watchman is as bad a book as many critics have made it out to be.
My initial reaction to Go Set A Watchman was resentful. As a little-known author, I was irritated by the idea that some famous writer could submit to a publisher what was essentially a rough draft and it would immediately become a bestseller.
I thought about how many talented authors work in obscurity while a select few churn out books that the masses snap up in drugstores and airport kiosks.
But there’s no sense crying about that. It is what it is. Big-name authors like John Grisham, Michael Connelly, and Sandra Brown could publish 400 pages of random keystrokes that would sell like ice scrapers in Buffalo.
When I actually got around to reading Go Set A Watchman, I had other issues with the book.
For one, I thought there were way too many flashbacks. The story shifts so abruptly back and forth between the present and the past that I thought I would need to be fitted for a neck brace.
Also, I didn’t find the grown-up Scout to be a very likeable protagonist. Maybe I have some gender bias on this point. I attended a book club discussion about Go Set A Watchman in which the participants, who were primarily women, admiringly described her as spunky or feisty. In the book, Scout looks down her nose at just about everybody from her hometown and toys with the affections of the guy who has worshipped her since childhood. To me, that goes beyond spunkiness into the realm of something far less appealing.
But I’m sure the most controversial aspect of Go Set A Watchman is its depiction of Atticus Finch, Scout’s father, not as the pillar of moral rectitude he was in To Kill A Mockingbird, but as an unapologetic racist.
One of my friends, who loved To Kill A Mockingbird and worshipped Atticus Finch, said Go Set A Watchman was so bad that it ruined her memory of the first book. (I had a similar reaction to Aliens 3, so I can relate.)
Here’s the thing, though: The ending of Go Set A Watchman is what makes the book interesting and thought-provoking. After discovering her father and most of the people she has known all her life are racists, Scout decides against leaving her small Alabama hometown for a more enlightened life in New York City.
That’s not a classic Hollywood ending. However, I think it’s a lot more realistic.
Very few of us get the opportunity in our daily lives to face down an angry mob and show it the error of its ways, as Atticus Finch heroically did in To Kill A Mockingbird. Racism and other forms of bigotry are pervasive in our society, but they manifest themselves in subtle ways.
Most often they come in the form of comments from co-workers, neighbors or even family members. In Go Set A Watchman, Scout faces a similar scenario.
In real life, pulling up stakes and moving to some racial utopia isn’t an option. (Based on my reading of history, Scout’s New York of the 1950s wouldn’t have qualified as such a utopia, anyway.)
When Scout decides to remain in her hometown, she pledges to remain true to her own principles and try to affect change in attitudes wherever she can. And that’s probably the best any of us could hope to do in our own lives.
Go Set A Watchman may have been written more than half a century ago, but it’s very relevant to the times in which we live and the conflicts we must still confront.
In my mind, that doesn’t qualify the book a classic, but it’s not a legacy-spoiler, either.
Blake Fontenay spent more than 25 years as a reporter, columnist and editorial writer for metropolitan daily newspapers—including the Sacramento Bee, (Jacksonville) Florida Times-Union, Orlando Sentinel and (Memphis) Commercial Appeal. He won several awards for editorial writing while at the Commercial Appeal.
Since leaving the newspaper business, he has worked as the communications director for Tennessee’s Comptroller, Treasurer and Secretary of State. He is currently the coordinator for the Tri-Star Chronicles project at the Tennessee State Library and Archives.
His debut novel, The Politics of Barbecue, was published by John F. Blair Publisher in September, 2012. The Politics of Barbecue won the Independent Publishers Book Awards gold medal for fiction in the South region in 2013. Scouts’ Honor, which was released in July 2014, is his second novel.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Give "Go Set A Watchman" Its Due / Blake Fontenay
In the month since the passing of legendary American author Harper Lee, we have seen a great deal of turmoil, as a nation and as a world. Political unrest and racial tension continue to plague our society to this day, reminding us of the importance of books like To Kill A Mockingbird, which inspire us all to take a stand for what is right.For many of her fans, Ms. Lee’s controversial Go Set A Watchman failed to live up to the moral caliber of To Kill A Mockingbird, but, as former journalist and Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded author Blake Fontenay examines in this week’s guest blog, there’s important and relevant inspiration to be found in Go Set A Watchman, as well.Happy reading!Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Give Go Set A Watchman Its Due
By Blake Fontenay
(Spoiler Alert: If you haven’t yet read Go Set A Watchman but intend to, don’t look at this post until you have.)
When the news broke that a “new” Harper Lee novel had been discovered and was slated for publication, I remember what an uproar it caused.
There were some who worried that the book, Go Set A Watchman, would somehow tarnish the legacy Ms. Lee created for herself when she wrote her Pulitzer Prize-winning novel, To Kill A Mockingbird.
Since Ms. Lee’s passing on Feb. 19, I’ve been reflecting on that concern.
First of all, I believe Ms. Lee’s legacy is safe, on the strength of To Kill A Mockingbird alone. Unless we find out later that she was using the literary equivalent of steroids when she wrote that classic, I think her status as a hall of famer is assured.
Having said that, I would also add that I don’t think Go Set A Watchman is as bad a book as many critics have made it out to be.
My initial reaction to Go Set A Watchman was resentful. As a little-known author, I was irritated by the idea that some famous writer could submit to a publisher what was essentially a rough draft and it would immediately become a bestseller.
I thought about how many talented authors work in obscurity while a select few churn out books that the masses snap up in drugstores and airport kiosks.
But there’s no sense crying about that. It is what it is. Big-name authors like John Grisham, Michael Connelly, and Sandra Brown could publish 400 pages of random keystrokes that would sell like ice scrapers in Buffalo.
When I actually got around to reading Go Set A Watchman, I had other issues with the book.
For one, I thought there were way too many flashbacks. The story shifts so abruptly back and forth between the present and the past that I thought I would need to be fitted for a neck brace.
Also, I didn’t find the grown-up Scout to be a very likeable protagonist. Maybe I have some gender bias on this point. I attended a book club discussion about Go Set A Watchman in which the participants, who were primarily women, admiringly described her as spunky or feisty. In the book, Scout looks down her nose at just about everybody from her hometown and toys with the affections of the guy who has worshipped her since childhood. To me, that goes beyond spunkiness into the realm of something far less appealing.
But I’m sure the most controversial aspect of Go Set A Watchman is its depiction of Atticus Finch, Scout’s father, not as the pillar of moral rectitude he was in To Kill A Mockingbird, but as an unapologetic racist.
One of my friends, who loved To Kill A Mockingbird and worshipped Atticus Finch, said Go Set A Watchman was so bad that it ruined her memory of the first book. (I had a similar reaction to Aliens 3, so I can relate.)
Here’s the thing, though: The ending of Go Set A Watchman is what makes the book interesting and thought-provoking. After discovering her father and most of the people she has known all her life are racists, Scout decides against leaving her small Alabama hometown for a more enlightened life in New York City.
That’s not a classic Hollywood ending. However, I think it’s a lot more realistic.
Very few of us get the opportunity in our daily lives to face down an angry mob and show it the error of its ways, as Atticus Finch heroically did in To Kill A Mockingbird. Racism and other forms of bigotry are pervasive in our society, but they manifest themselves in subtle ways.
Most often they come in the form of comments from co-workers, neighbors or even family members. In Go Set A Watchman, Scout faces a similar scenario.
In real life, pulling up stakes and moving to some racial utopia isn’t an option. (Based on my reading of history, Scout’s New York of the 1950s wouldn’t have qualified as such a utopia, anyway.)
When Scout decides to remain in her hometown, she pledges to remain true to her own principles and try to affect change in attitudes wherever she can. And that’s probably the best any of us could hope to do in our own lives.
Go Set A Watchman may have been written more than half a century ago, but it’s very relevant to the times in which we live and the conflicts we must still confront.
In my mind, that doesn’t qualify the book a classic, but it’s not a legacy-spoiler, either.
Blake Fontenay spent more than 25 years as a reporter, columnist and editorial writer for metropolitan daily newspapers—including the Sacramento Bee, (Jacksonville) Florida Times-Union, Orlando Sentinel and (Memphis) Commercial Appeal. He won several awards for editorial writing while at the Commercial Appeal.
Since leaving the newspaper business, he has worked as the communications director for Tennessee’s Comptroller, Treasurer and Secretary of State. He is currently the coordinator for the Tri-Star Chronicles project at the Tennessee State Library and Archives.
His debut novel, The Politics of Barbecue, was published by John F. Blair Publisher in September, 2012. The Politics of Barbecue won the Independent Publishers Book Awards gold medal for fiction in the South region in 2013. Scouts’ Honor, which was released in July 2014, is his second novel.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Give "Go Set A Watchman" Its Due / Blake Fontenay
In the month since the passing of legendary American author Harper Lee, we have seen a great deal of turmoil, as a nation and as a world. Political unrest and racial tension continue to plague our society to this day, reminding us of the importance of books like To Kill A Mockingbird, which inspire us all to take a stand for what is right.For many of her fans, Ms. Lee’s controversial Go Set A Watchman failed to live up to the moral caliber of To Kill A Mockingbird, but, as former journalist and Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded author Blake Fontenay examines in this week’s guest blog, there’s important and relevant inspiration to be found in Go Set A Watchman, as well.Happy reading!Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Give Go Set A Watchman Its Due
By Blake Fontenay
(Spoiler Alert: If you haven’t yet read Go Set A Watchman but intend to, don’t look at this post until you have.)
When the news broke that a “new” Harper Lee novel had been discovered and was slated for publication, I remember what an uproar it caused.
There were some who worried that the book, Go Set A Watchman, would somehow tarnish the legacy Ms. Lee created for herself when she wrote her Pulitzer Prize-winning novel, To Kill A Mockingbird.
Since Ms. Lee’s passing on Feb. 19, I’ve been reflecting on that concern.
First of all, I believe Ms. Lee’s legacy is safe, on the strength of To Kill A Mockingbird alone. Unless we find out later that she was using the literary equivalent of steroids when she wrote that classic, I think her status as a hall of famer is assured.
Having said that, I would also add that I don’t think Go Set A Watchman is as bad a book as many critics have made it out to be.
My initial reaction to Go Set A Watchman was resentful. As a little-known author, I was irritated by the idea that some famous writer could submit to a publisher what was essentially a rough draft and it would immediately become a bestseller.
I thought about how many talented authors work in obscurity while a select few churn out books that the masses snap up in drugstores and airport kiosks.
But there’s no sense crying about that. It is what it is. Big-name authors like John Grisham, Michael Connelly, and Sandra Brown could publish 400 pages of random keystrokes that would sell like ice scrapers in Buffalo.
When I actually got around to reading Go Set A Watchman, I had other issues with the book.
For one, I thought there were way too many flashbacks. The story shifts so abruptly back and forth between the present and the past that I thought I would need to be fitted for a neck brace.
Also, I didn’t find the grown-up Scout to be a very likeable protagonist. Maybe I have some gender bias on this point. I attended a book club discussion about Go Set A Watchman in which the participants, who were primarily women, admiringly described her as spunky or feisty. In the book, Scout looks down her nose at just about everybody from her hometown and toys with the affections of the guy who has worshipped her since childhood. To me, that goes beyond spunkiness into the realm of something far less appealing.
But I’m sure the most controversial aspect of Go Set A Watchman is its depiction of Atticus Finch, Scout’s father, not as the pillar of moral rectitude he was in To Kill A Mockingbird, but as an unapologetic racist.
One of my friends, who loved To Kill A Mockingbird and worshipped Atticus Finch, said Go Set A Watchman was so bad that it ruined her memory of the first book. (I had a similar reaction to Aliens 3, so I can relate.)
Here’s the thing, though: The ending of Go Set A Watchman is what makes the book interesting and thought-provoking. After discovering her father and most of the people she has known all her life are racists, Scout decides against leaving her small Alabama hometown for a more enlightened life in New York City.
That’s not a classic Hollywood ending. However, I think it’s a lot more realistic.
Very few of us get the opportunity in our daily lives to face down an angry mob and show it the error of its ways, as Atticus Finch heroically did in To Kill A Mockingbird. Racism and other forms of bigotry are pervasive in our society, but they manifest themselves in subtle ways.
Most often they come in the form of comments from co-workers, neighbors or even family members. In Go Set A Watchman, Scout faces a similar scenario.
In real life, pulling up stakes and moving to some racial utopia isn’t an option. (Based on my reading of history, Scout’s New York of the 1950s wouldn’t have qualified as such a utopia, anyway.)
When Scout decides to remain in her hometown, she pledges to remain true to her own principles and try to affect change in attitudes wherever she can. And that’s probably the best any of us could hope to do in our own lives.
Go Set A Watchman may have been written more than half a century ago, but it’s very relevant to the times in which we live and the conflicts we must still confront.
In my mind, that doesn’t qualify the book a classic, but it’s not a legacy-spoiler, either.
Blake Fontenay spent more than 25 years as a reporter, columnist and editorial writer for metropolitan daily newspapers—including the Sacramento Bee, (Jacksonville) Florida Times-Union, Orlando Sentinel and (Memphis) Commercial Appeal. He won several awards for editorial writing while at the Commercial Appeal.
Since leaving the newspaper business, he has worked as the communications director for Tennessee’s Comptroller, Treasurer and Secretary of State. He is currently the coordinator for the Tri-Star Chronicles project at the Tennessee State Library and Archives.
His debut novel, The Politics of Barbecue, was published by John F. Blair Publisher in September, 2012. The Politics of Barbecue won the Independent Publishers Book Awards gold medal for fiction in the South region in 2013. Scouts’ Honor, which was released in July 2014, is his second novel.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Turning Your Hobby Into a Mystery–The Basis of a Cozy / Lynn Cahoon
The types of stories you most enjoy are good indicators of the types of stories you’re destined to write. After all, you have no guarantee that anyone else will get a chance to read your masterpiece… might as well make it the kind of book you’d like! This week’s guest blogger Lynn Cahoon waxes eloquent on her greatest love: cozies. Follow her lead, and you just might discover—or reinvigorate—your authorial calling.
Happy reading!
Clay Stafford
Founder Killer Nashville
Publisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Turning Your Hobby Into a Mystery–The Basis of a Cozy
By Lynn Cahoon
I didn’t know what I was reading, but I liked it.
When I moved to Illinois almost ten years ago now, I was unemployed. Reading was my past time as I waited for returned calls from job applications. I kept checking books out of the mystery section at the library. One, I would love. The next, not so much. Turning to the spine, I wondered why the two books that couldn’t be so different had the same sticker: mystery.
Finally, I realized the books I loved were softer, less gritty, and all about the characters. Kind of like the Nancy Drew books I grew up reading. They were cozy mysteries. And when I started writing, that’s where my interests fell.
So why cozy?
The books often circle around a hobby. Knitting, crochet, sewing, and even scrapbooking; they’ve all had series where the main character and her/his friends are involved with said craft. Or they are about food. I like stories where food and food preparation are a big part of the plot. One long-running series just ended—Julie Hyzy with the White House Chef Mysteries. And Laura Bradford is moving from writing about the Amish to launching a dessert food truck mystery this year: Book One of the Emergency Dessert Squad series, Éclair and Present Danger, releases in June.
Most cozy mysteries center around what would have been called in the 70’s “the home arts”. (Yes, I’ll admit to taking Home Ec, Sewing, and even Crafting as high school electives.) There seems to be a resurgence of taking up crafting like knitting or quilting, and not just with women. All you have to do is check out Pinterest. Add in a dog or a cat, and the series is sure to sell.
All kidding aside, the main reason I write and read cozy mysteries is that I love the characters. My Tourist Trap series is set in South Cove, a fictional California tourist town. Writing about my main character Jill Gardner’s adventures in South Cove gives me a chance to catch up with the rest of the gang. What’s going on with Aunt Jackie? Is she still dating the overweight antique dealer, Josh? And who’s Toby, the part-time deputy/barista, with now? Why does Greg’s ex-wife care about who he’s seeing? Okay, maybe only Jill’s wondering about that one.
Yep, I’ve admitted it. I love the gossip. Real or fake, the small town chatter keeps me going back to learn more about my characters and the new ones that wander into South Cove. The fact that the bad guy gets his due at the end is just icing on the cupcake. (I sometimes worry I might be driving away real tourists from the Pacific Coast Highway, writing so many murders in one small central California coast town.)
Truth, justice, and the cozy way. Now that’s my kind of superpower.
For more of Jill’s adventures, check out my new cozy, Murder on Wheels, releasing February 2, 2016, in which robbery, vandalism, and murder sour South Cove’s brand-new food truck craze…
Lynn Cahoon is the author of the New York Times and USA Today bestselling Tourist Trap cozy mystery series. Guidebook to Murder, book 1 of the series won the Reader's Crown for Mystery Fiction in 2015. She's also the author of the soon-to-be-released Cat Latimer series, with the first book, A STORY TO KILL, releasing in mass-market paperback September 2016. She lives in a small town like the ones she loves to write about, with her husband and two fur babies. Sign up for her newsletter at www.lynncahoon.com
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Turning Your Hobby Into a Mystery–The Basis of a Cozy / Lynn Cahoon
The types of stories you most enjoy are good indicators of the types of stories you’re destined to write. After all, you have no guarantee that anyone else will get a chance to read your masterpiece… might as well make it the kind of book you’d like! This week’s guest blogger Lynn Cahoon waxes eloquent on her greatest love: cozies. Follow her lead, and you just might discover—or reinvigorate—your authorial calling.Happy reading!Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Turning Your Hobby Into a Mystery–The Basis of a Cozy
By Lynn Cahoon
I didn’t know what I was reading, but I liked it.
When I moved to Illinois almost ten years ago now, I was unemployed. Reading was my past time as I waited for returned calls from job applications. I kept checking books out of the mystery section at the library. One, I would love. The next, not so much. Turning to the spine, I wondered why the two books that couldn’t be so different had the same sticker: mystery.
Finally, I realized the books I loved were softer, less gritty, and all about the characters. Kind of like the Nancy Drew books I grew up reading. They were cozy mysteries. And when I started writing, that’s where my interests fell.
So why cozy?
The books often circle around a hobby. Knitting, crochet, sewing, and even scrapbooking; they’ve all had series where the main character and her/his friends are involved with said craft. Or they are about food. I like stories where food and food preparation are a big part of the plot. One long-running series just ended—Julie Hyzy with the White House Chef Mysteries. And Laura Bradford is moving from writing about the Amish to launching a dessert food truck mystery this year: Book One of the Emergency Dessert Squad series, Éclair and Present Danger, releases in June.
Most cozy mysteries center around what would have been called in the 70’s “the home arts”. (Yes, I’ll admit to taking Home Ec, Sewing, and even Crafting as high school electives.) There seems to be a resurgence of taking up crafting like knitting or quilting, and not just with women. All you have to do is check out Pinterest. Add in a dog or a cat, and the series is sure to sell.
All kidding aside, the main reason I write and read cozy mysteries is that I love the characters. My Tourist Trap series is set in South Cove, a fictional California tourist town. Writing about my main character Jill Gardner’s adventures in South Cove gives me a chance to catch up with the rest of the gang. What’s going on with Aunt Jackie? Is she still dating the overweight antique dealer, Josh? And who’s Toby, the part-time deputy/barista, with now? Why does Greg’s ex-wife care about who he’s seeing? Okay, maybe only Jill’s wondering about that one.
Yep, I’ve admitted it. I love the gossip. Real or fake, the small town chatter keeps me going back to learn more about my characters and the new ones that wander into South Cove. The fact that the bad guy gets his due at the end is just icing on the cupcake. (I sometimes worry I might be driving away real tourists from the Pacific Coast Highway, writing so many murders in one small central California coast town.)
Truth, justice, and the cozy way. Now that’s my kind of superpower.
For more of Jill’s adventures, check out my new cozy, Murder on Wheels, releasing February 2, 2016, in which robbery, vandalism, and murder sour South Cove’s brand-new food truck craze…
Lynn Cahoon is the author of the New York Times and USA Today bestselling Tourist Trap cozy mystery series. Guidebook to Murder, book 1 of the series won the Reader's Crown for Mystery Fiction in 2015. She's also the author of the soon-to-be-released Cat Latimer series, with the first book, A STORY TO KILL, releasing in mass-market paperback September 2016. She lives in a small town like the ones she loves to write about, with her husband and two fur babies. Sign up for her newsletter at www.lynncahoon.com
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Turning Your Hobby Into a Mystery–The Basis of a Cozy / Lynn Cahoon
The types of stories you most enjoy are good indicators of the types of stories you’re destined to write. After all, you have no guarantee that anyone else will get a chance to read your masterpiece… might as well make it the kind of book you’d like! This week’s guest blogger Lynn Cahoon waxes eloquent on her greatest love: cozies. Follow her lead, and you just might discover—or reinvigorate—your authorial calling.Happy reading!Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Turning Your Hobby Into a Mystery–The Basis of a Cozy
By Lynn Cahoon
I didn’t know what I was reading, but I liked it.
When I moved to Illinois almost ten years ago now, I was unemployed. Reading was my past time as I waited for returned calls from job applications. I kept checking books out of the mystery section at the library. One, I would love. The next, not so much. Turning to the spine, I wondered why the two books that couldn’t be so different had the same sticker: mystery.
Finally, I realized the books I loved were softer, less gritty, and all about the characters. Kind of like the Nancy Drew books I grew up reading. They were cozy mysteries. And when I started writing, that’s where my interests fell.
So why cozy?
The books often circle around a hobby. Knitting, crochet, sewing, and even scrapbooking; they’ve all had series where the main character and her/his friends are involved with said craft. Or they are about food. I like stories where food and food preparation are a big part of the plot. One long-running series just ended—Julie Hyzy with the White House Chef Mysteries. And Laura Bradford is moving from writing about the Amish to launching a dessert food truck mystery this year: Book One of the Emergency Dessert Squad series, Éclair and Present Danger, releases in June.
Most cozy mysteries center around what would have been called in the 70’s “the home arts”. (Yes, I’ll admit to taking Home Ec, Sewing, and even Crafting as high school electives.) There seems to be a resurgence of taking up crafting like knitting or quilting, and not just with women. All you have to do is check out Pinterest. Add in a dog or a cat, and the series is sure to sell.
All kidding aside, the main reason I write and read cozy mysteries is that I love the characters. My Tourist Trap series is set in South Cove, a fictional California tourist town. Writing about my main character Jill Gardner’s adventures in South Cove gives me a chance to catch up with the rest of the gang. What’s going on with Aunt Jackie? Is she still dating the overweight antique dealer, Josh? And who’s Toby, the part-time deputy/barista, with now? Why does Greg’s ex-wife care about who he’s seeing? Okay, maybe only Jill’s wondering about that one.
Yep, I’ve admitted it. I love the gossip. Real or fake, the small town chatter keeps me going back to learn more about my characters and the new ones that wander into South Cove. The fact that the bad guy gets his due at the end is just icing on the cupcake. (I sometimes worry I might be driving away real tourists from the Pacific Coast Highway, writing so many murders in one small central California coast town.)
Truth, justice, and the cozy way. Now that’s my kind of superpower.
For more of Jill’s adventures, check out my new cozy, Murder on Wheels, releasing February 2, 2016, in which robbery, vandalism, and murder sour South Cove’s brand-new food truck craze…
Lynn Cahoon is the author of the New York Times and USA Today bestselling Tourist Trap cozy mystery series. Guidebook to Murder, book 1 of the series won the Reader's Crown for Mystery Fiction in 2015. She's also the author of the soon-to-be-released Cat Latimer series, with the first book, A STORY TO KILL, releasing in mass-market paperback September 2016. She lives in a small town like the ones she loves to write about, with her husband and two fur babies. Sign up for her newsletter at www.lynncahoon.com
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Finding the Magic: Three Ingredients for a Memorable Thriller / J. B. Manas
Irony, humor, and catharsis have been helping us tell better stories since Aristotle’s Poetics—and were probably there, instinctually, in the work of the best tale-spinners even before the terms had names. This week’s guest blogger, author J. B. Manas, applies these analytical essentials to successful thrillers to help us all upgrade our stories from “excellent” to “unforgettable”.
Happy reading!
Clay Stafford
Founder Killer Nashville
Publisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Finding the Magic: Three Ingredients for a Memorable Thriller
By J.B. Manas
For many of us, writing comes fairly easy. But giving it that extra, elusive “something” that lifts the story above others of its type? Creating a story that’s buzzworthy, emotionally satisfying, and able to withstand the test of time? That’s the difficult part. I like to call this “finding the magic”.
As I work on my current novel, a sci-fi thriller titled Atticus, I’ve been analyzing what elements it absolutely must have if it is to grip readers and lure potential fans. If we look at some of history’s greatest thrillers and adventure stories in literature and film, what variables elevate them above the crowded sea of mediocrity?
Sure, any good thriller has to have the usual things: compelling characters, snappy dialogue, a lead with a goal, a strong villain, high stakes, mounting conflict; the list goes on and on. While vitally important, these things are merely the staples of writing thriller and adventure stories. They have to be there, or the book will quickly fade into oblivion. But how do you find the magic that takes a thriller from good to great?
I’ve narrowed it down to three special ingredients: irony, humor, and catharsis. Let’s look at each.
1. Isn’t it Ironic?
A touch of irony can often be the missing ingredient that a story needs to take it to another level. For instance, in Jaws, a water-phobic sheriff must stop a great white shark that’s been devouring swimmers in high tourist season at the beach. Not just a sheriff, but a water-phobic one! In Jurassic Park, a paleontologist who hates kids has to spend much of the story rescuing two kids when real live dinosaurs run amok in a theme park. In Silence of the Lambs, to whom does Clarice Starling have to bare her soul in order to catch a serial killer? Why, another serial killer, of course!
When writing my debut novel with co-author Ed Miller, The Kronos Interference, I ruminated on this. In the story, a physicist is called to investigate an unusual deep-sea discovery. It takes him on a time-traveling journey that defies logic and, in some cases, science. So I suggested we start him out as a jaded skeptic who relies on “just the facts”. It was subtle irony, but it was there, and I like to think it made a difference.
2. The Best Medicine
Alfred Hitchcock often spoke about the need to balance tension with humor, and he was certainly a master at it, as evident in North by Northwest, with Cary Grant quipping his way through increasingly dire circumstances. This is also what made the second Star Wars film, The Empire Strikes Back, such a standout, with the witty banter between Han, Luke, and Princess Leia. And think of the scene in Jurassic Park, after a scared young boy barely escapes death when the car he was trapped in plummeted down a tree following a terrifying T-Rex chase. His only words to his rescuer, Alan Grant, are, “I threw up.”
In my current work-in-progress, Atticus, the lead character is a 22-year-old geek girl who works in a comic book shop. So when a falling military craft nearly runs her off the road, and her rescue of a British amnesiac survivor leads them both to be chased by government assassins, on whom does she rely for help? Her geeky ex-boyfriend and his gruff veteran cop uncle. This allows for lots of pop culture references, generation-gap quips, and funny dialogue to offset the tense situations that follow.
3. A Perfect Ending
Silence of the Lambs was an exceptional story for many reasons. But, in the movie version, what made filmgoers exit the theaters with that elusive giddy feeling was not only psychotic cannibal Hannibal Lecter telling rookie FBI agent Clarice Starling, “The world is more interesting with you in it,” but also, his final line, “I do wish we could chat longer, but I’m having an old friend for dinner.”
Not only was this funny AND ironic, but it was a delicious (pardon the pun) way to: (a) leave a final wink at Hannibal Lecter’s relationship with Clarice Starling, (b) offer just desserts (again, pardon the pun) for the corrupt Dr. Chilton, and (c) give a glimpse of Lecter enjoying his hard-earned freedom. This was cathartic on many levels, and I would argue, more powerful than the resolution of the main plot—the rescue of the senator’s daughter and the death of the main antagonist, Buffalo Bill.
In order for a catharsis to be achieved at the end, the groundwork must be laid. Strong character subplots must be put in place—a wish for something, a need for retribution, a relationship in need of healing. It should be over and above the resolution of the main plot. And it’s what I’m focused on now as I refine my current novel beyond its main, twisty plot and its (hopefully) colorful characters. Does your story have a cathartic ending? If not, what could be done to add one? I’d love to hear from you.
J. B. Manas is a Philadelphia-based author of fiction and nonfiction. His debut novel with co-author Edward Miller, The Kronos Interference, was named to Kirkus Reviews’ Best of 2012, and earned a starred review. He is currently working on a sci-fi thriller, Atticus, targeted for release in 2016. His nonfiction books on organizational management and lessons from history have been translated into eight languages and course-adopted in universities worldwide. Manas is an avid movie buff, pop culture maven, popular comic con speaker, art lover, world traveler, songwriter and guitarist, technology geek, wine connoisseur, and an armchair philosopher–all of which make their way into his writing at one time or another. Visit his website at www.jbmanas.com or email him at jb@jbmanas.com.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Finding the Magic: Three Ingredients for a Memorable Thriller / J. B. Manas
Irony, humor, and catharsis have been helping us tell better stories since Aristotle’s Poetics—and were probably there, instinctually, in the work of the best tale-spinners even before the terms had names. This week’s guest blogger, author J. B. Manas, applies these analytical essentials to successful thrillers to help us all upgrade our stories from “excellent” to “unforgettable”.Happy reading!Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Finding the Magic: Three Ingredients for a Memorable Thriller
By J.B. Manas
For many of us, writing comes fairly easy. But giving it that extra, elusive “something” that lifts the story above others of its type? Creating a story that’s buzzworthy, emotionally satisfying, and able to withstand the test of time? That’s the difficult part. I like to call this “finding the magic”.
As I work on my current novel, a sci-fi thriller titled Atticus, I’ve been analyzing what elements it absolutely must have if it is to grip readers and lure potential fans. If we look at some of history’s greatest thrillers and adventure stories in literature and film, what variables elevate them above the crowded sea of mediocrity?
Sure, any good thriller has to have the usual things: compelling characters, snappy dialogue, a lead with a goal, a strong villain, high stakes, mounting conflict; the list goes on and on. While vitally important, these things are merely the staples of writing thriller and adventure stories. They have to be there, or the book will quickly fade into oblivion. But how do you find the magic that takes a thriller from good to great?
I’ve narrowed it down to three special ingredients: irony, humor, and catharsis. Let’s look at each.
1. Isn’t it Ironic?
A touch of irony can often be the missing ingredient that a story needs to take it to another level. For instance, in Jaws, a water-phobic sheriff must stop a great white shark that’s been devouring swimmers in high tourist season at the beach. Not just a sheriff, but a water-phobic one! In Jurassic Park, a paleontologist who hates kids has to spend much of the story rescuing two kids when real live dinosaurs run amok in a theme park. In Silence of the Lambs, to whom does Clarice Starling have to bare her soul in order to catch a serial killer? Why, another serial killer, of course!
When writing my debut novel with co-author Ed Miller, The Kronos Interference, I ruminated on this. In the story, a physicist is called to investigate an unusual deep-sea discovery. It takes him on a time-traveling journey that defies logic and, in some cases, science. So I suggested we start him out as a jaded skeptic who relies on “just the facts”. It was subtle irony, but it was there, and I like to think it made a difference.
2. The Best Medicine
Alfred Hitchcock often spoke about the need to balance tension with humor, and he was certainly a master at it, as evident in North by Northwest, with Cary Grant quipping his way through increasingly dire circumstances. This is also what made the second Star Wars film, The Empire Strikes Back, such a standout, with the witty banter between Han, Luke, and Princess Leia. And think of the scene in Jurassic Park, after a scared young boy barely escapes death when the car he was trapped in plummeted down a tree following a terrifying T-Rex chase. His only words to his rescuer, Alan Grant, are, “I threw up.”
In my current work-in-progress, Atticus, the lead character is a 22-year-old geek girl who works in a comic book shop. So when a falling military craft nearly runs her off the road, and her rescue of a British amnesiac survivor leads them both to be chased by government assassins, on whom does she rely for help? Her geeky ex-boyfriend and his gruff veteran cop uncle. This allows for lots of pop culture references, generation-gap quips, and funny dialogue to offset the tense situations that follow.
3. A Perfect Ending
Silence of the Lambs was an exceptional story for many reasons. But, in the movie version, what made filmgoers exit the theaters with that elusive giddy feeling was not only psychotic cannibal Hannibal Lecter telling rookie FBI agent Clarice Starling, “The world is more interesting with you in it,” but also, his final line, “I do wish we could chat longer, but I’m having an old friend for dinner.”
Not only was this funny AND ironic, but it was a delicious (pardon the pun) way to: (a) leave a final wink at Hannibal Lecter’s relationship with Clarice Starling, (b) offer just desserts (again, pardon the pun) for the corrupt Dr. Chilton, and (c) give a glimpse of Lecter enjoying his hard-earned freedom. This was cathartic on many levels, and I would argue, more powerful than the resolution of the main plot—the rescue of the senator’s daughter and the death of the main antagonist, Buffalo Bill.
In order for a catharsis to be achieved at the end, the groundwork must be laid. Strong character subplots must be put in place—a wish for something, a need for retribution, a relationship in need of healing. It should be over and above the resolution of the main plot. And it’s what I’m focused on now as I refine my current novel beyond its main, twisty plot and its (hopefully) colorful characters. Does your story have a cathartic ending? If not, what could be done to add one? I’d love to hear from you.
J. B. Manas is a Philadelphia-based author of fiction and nonfiction. His debut novel with co-author Edward Miller, The Kronos Interference, was named to Kirkus Reviews’ Best of 2012, and earned a starred review. He is currently working on a sci-fi thriller, Atticus, targeted for release in 2016. His nonfiction books on organizational management and lessons from history have been translated into eight languages and course-adopted in universities worldwide. Manas is an avid movie buff, pop culture maven, popular comic con speaker, art lover, world traveler, songwriter and guitarist, technology geek, wine connoisseur, and an armchair philosopher–all of which make their way into his writing at one time or another. Visit his website at www.jbmanas.com or email him at jb@jbmanas.com.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Finding the Magic: Three Ingredients for a Memorable Thriller / J. B. Manas
Irony, humor, and catharsis have been helping us tell better stories since Aristotle’s Poetics—and were probably there, instinctually, in the work of the best tale-spinners even before the terms had names. This week’s guest blogger, author J. B. Manas, applies these analytical essentials to successful thrillers to help us all upgrade our stories from “excellent” to “unforgettable”.Happy reading!Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Finding the Magic: Three Ingredients for a Memorable Thriller
By J.B. Manas
For many of us, writing comes fairly easy. But giving it that extra, elusive “something” that lifts the story above others of its type? Creating a story that’s buzzworthy, emotionally satisfying, and able to withstand the test of time? That’s the difficult part. I like to call this “finding the magic”.
As I work on my current novel, a sci-fi thriller titled Atticus, I’ve been analyzing what elements it absolutely must have if it is to grip readers and lure potential fans. If we look at some of history’s greatest thrillers and adventure stories in literature and film, what variables elevate them above the crowded sea of mediocrity?
Sure, any good thriller has to have the usual things: compelling characters, snappy dialogue, a lead with a goal, a strong villain, high stakes, mounting conflict; the list goes on and on. While vitally important, these things are merely the staples of writing thriller and adventure stories. They have to be there, or the book will quickly fade into oblivion. But how do you find the magic that takes a thriller from good to great?
I’ve narrowed it down to three special ingredients: irony, humor, and catharsis. Let’s look at each.
1. Isn’t it Ironic?
A touch of irony can often be the missing ingredient that a story needs to take it to another level. For instance, in Jaws, a water-phobic sheriff must stop a great white shark that’s been devouring swimmers in high tourist season at the beach. Not just a sheriff, but a water-phobic one! In Jurassic Park, a paleontologist who hates kids has to spend much of the story rescuing two kids when real live dinosaurs run amok in a theme park. In Silence of the Lambs, to whom does Clarice Starling have to bare her soul in order to catch a serial killer? Why, another serial killer, of course!
When writing my debut novel with co-author Ed Miller, The Kronos Interference, I ruminated on this. In the story, a physicist is called to investigate an unusual deep-sea discovery. It takes him on a time-traveling journey that defies logic and, in some cases, science. So I suggested we start him out as a jaded skeptic who relies on “just the facts”. It was subtle irony, but it was there, and I like to think it made a difference.
2. The Best Medicine
Alfred Hitchcock often spoke about the need to balance tension with humor, and he was certainly a master at it, as evident in North by Northwest, with Cary Grant quipping his way through increasingly dire circumstances. This is also what made the second Star Wars film, The Empire Strikes Back, such a standout, with the witty banter between Han, Luke, and Princess Leia. And think of the scene in Jurassic Park, after a scared young boy barely escapes death when the car he was trapped in plummeted down a tree following a terrifying T-Rex chase. His only words to his rescuer, Alan Grant, are, “I threw up.”
In my current work-in-progress, Atticus, the lead character is a 22-year-old geek girl who works in a comic book shop. So when a falling military craft nearly runs her off the road, and her rescue of a British amnesiac survivor leads them both to be chased by government assassins, on whom does she rely for help? Her geeky ex-boyfriend and his gruff veteran cop uncle. This allows for lots of pop culture references, generation-gap quips, and funny dialogue to offset the tense situations that follow.
3. A Perfect Ending
Silence of the Lambs was an exceptional story for many reasons. But, in the movie version, what made filmgoers exit the theaters with that elusive giddy feeling was not only psychotic cannibal Hannibal Lecter telling rookie FBI agent Clarice Starling, “The world is more interesting with you in it,” but also, his final line, “I do wish we could chat longer, but I’m having an old friend for dinner.”
Not only was this funny AND ironic, but it was a delicious (pardon the pun) way to: (a) leave a final wink at Hannibal Lecter’s relationship with Clarice Starling, (b) offer just desserts (again, pardon the pun) for the corrupt Dr. Chilton, and (c) give a glimpse of Lecter enjoying his hard-earned freedom. This was cathartic on many levels, and I would argue, more powerful than the resolution of the main plot—the rescue of the senator’s daughter and the death of the main antagonist, Buffalo Bill.
In order for a catharsis to be achieved at the end, the groundwork must be laid. Strong character subplots must be put in place—a wish for something, a need for retribution, a relationship in need of healing. It should be over and above the resolution of the main plot. And it’s what I’m focused on now as I refine my current novel beyond its main, twisty plot and its (hopefully) colorful characters. Does your story have a cathartic ending? If not, what could be done to add one? I’d love to hear from you.
J. B. Manas is a Philadelphia-based author of fiction and nonfiction. His debut novel with co-author Edward Miller, The Kronos Interference, was named to Kirkus Reviews’ Best of 2012, and earned a starred review. He is currently working on a sci-fi thriller, Atticus, targeted for release in 2016. His nonfiction books on organizational management and lessons from history have been translated into eight languages and course-adopted in universities worldwide. Manas is an avid movie buff, pop culture maven, popular comic con speaker, art lover, world traveler, songwriter and guitarist, technology geek, wine connoisseur, and an armchair philosopher–all of which make their way into his writing at one time or another. Visit his website at www.jbmanas.com or email him at jb@jbmanas.com.
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Speed Writing To Keep Up With Speed Readers / John Hegenberger
The immediacy of the Internet has conditioned us to expect instant gratification. We’re so far past the days of dial-up that if a page takes more than two seconds to load, we check to see if our Wi-Fi is down. This gets us in trouble when we have to face a long-term project as ponderous as traditional publishing can be. What if I want my book to be available now? This week’s guest blogger John Hegenberger has used both self-publishing and traditional publishing to get his stories out there, and shares on the perks and pitfalls of each.
Happy reading!
Clay Stafford
Founder Killer Nashville
Publisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Speed Writing To Keep Up With Speed Readers
By John Hegenberger
The book publishing process is changing and accelerating.
A reader once asked me, “How long does it take to publish a book?”
Thirty years? Three years? Three months? Three days? Three hours?
For me, when I recently published Cross Examinations, a collection of short private eye stories, the answer was all the above.
I wrote the first draft back in 1988, which is still the setting for the tales today. Not long after, I encountered a series of personal needs involving my family and friends and found it best to put the manuscript into a drawer and build a career that assured us all a steady income. It all worked out beautifully, because about 27 years later with a career completed and three children grown, I was nearing retirement and it was time to reopen that drawer.
Thus, in 2012, I entered a whole new world of electronic publishing. The book went through a rewrite, along with several other manuscripts. And I began writing daily again and created another book; a novel, this time. And then an additional novel for a whole new PI series that I wanted to have published.
After approximately three months of searching, I found a publisher for the first novel. Ah, but then I was faced with the prospect of waiting another eight to ten-months while the editing and publishing process advanced. That seemed like forever.
I wanted to do something progressive in the meantime. So, having heard about this thing called self-publishing, I decided to give it a try with the short story collection while I waited for the novel to come out.
Again, I worked through three weeks of rewrites and polishes to create the content of Cross Examinations.
But then came the daunting task of learning to properly format and post an eBook. After another three days of poking around, reading up, and watching various videos, I pressed the Send button and launched my book into the world.
Next came the agonizing three-hour wait before the book became fully available on the website.
Finally, success was mine!
So, as you can see, the process contains many stages, but at each step along the way, I knew I was getting closer to the fulfillment of my dream. Looking back, it doesn’t seem to have been all that long, after all. I’m happy I took the time and I learned a lot from the process and quite a bit about marketing, too.
In fact, I now have two sequels out for Cross Examinations: Crossfire and Tripl3 Cross. Crossfire was completed last December, edited by the publisher, Rough Edges Press, over the holidays, and launched in January 2016.
Oh, and that first novel finally came out in November 2015. It’s titled Spyfall and is part of a second series of private eye novels, featuring a different detective, Stan Wade, LAPI. Spyfall was also written and sold early last year and saw print in November 2015. The second volume in this series, Starfall, will come out in February 2016, with several additional entries later in the year.
In both cases, the books have been fully edited and packaged by the publishers. The main difference is the speed of delivery to the readers. In this era of “binge-watching” TV series, it appears that readers want more of an immersive reading experience.
By the time Killer Nashville 2016 rolls around, I should have a good handle on which publication cycle the readers prefer. Perhaps it doesn’t matter so much how long it takes to get a book written, as how quickly the book can be offered for public enjoyment.
Born and raised in the heart of the heartland, Columbus, Ohio, John Hegenberger is the author of several series: Stan Wade LAPI in 1959, Eliot Cross Columbus-based PI in 1988, and Ace Hart, western gambler in Arizona in 1873. He’s a father of three, tennis enthusiast, collector of silent films and OTR, hiker, Francophile, B.A. Comparative Lit., pop culture author, ex-Navy, ex-marketing exec at Exxon, AT&T, and IBM, and happily married for 45 years and counting. He is also an active member of SFWA, PWA and ITW. Find more of John’s work at www.johnhegenberger.com
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Speed Writing To Keep Up With Speed Readers / John Hegenberger
The immediacy of the Internet has conditioned us to expect instant gratification. We’re so far past the days of dial-up that if a page takes more than two seconds to load, we check to see if our Wi-Fi is down. This gets us in trouble when we have to face a long-term project as ponderous as traditional publishing can be. What if I want my book to be available now? This week’s guest blogger John Hegenberger has used both self-publishing and traditional publishing to get his stories out there, and shares on the perks and pitfalls of each.Happy reading!Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Speed Writing To Keep Up With Speed Readers
By John Hegenberger
The book publishing process is changing and accelerating.
A reader once asked me, “How long does it take to publish a book?”
Thirty years? Three years? Three months? Three days? Three hours?
For me, when I recently published Cross Examinations, a collection of short private eye stories, the answer was all the above.
I wrote the first draft back in 1988, which is still the setting for the tales today. Not long after, I encountered a series of personal needs involving my family and friends and found it best to put the manuscript into a drawer and build a career that assured us all a steady income. It all worked out beautifully, because about 27 years later with a career completed and three children grown, I was nearing retirement and it was time to reopen that drawer.
Thus, in 2012, I entered a whole new world of electronic publishing. The book went through a rewrite, along with several other manuscripts. And I began writing daily again and created another book; a novel, this time. And then an additional novel for a whole new PI series that I wanted to have published.
After approximately three months of searching, I found a publisher for the first novel. Ah, but then I was faced with the prospect of waiting another eight to ten-months while the editing and publishing process advanced. That seemed like forever.
I wanted to do something progressive in the meantime. So, having heard about this thing called self-publishing, I decided to give it a try with the short story collection while I waited for the novel to come out.
Again, I worked through three weeks of rewrites and polishes to create the content of Cross Examinations.
But then came the daunting task of learning to properly format and post an eBook. After another three days of poking around, reading up, and watching various videos, I pressed the Send button and launched my book into the world.
Next came the agonizing three-hour wait before the book became fully available on the website.
Finally, success was mine!
So, as you can see, the process contains many stages, but at each step along the way, I knew I was getting closer to the fulfillment of my dream. Looking back, it doesn’t seem to have been all that long, after all. I’m happy I took the time and I learned a lot from the process and quite a bit about marketing, too.
In fact, I now have two sequels out for Cross Examinations: Crossfire and Tripl3 Cross. Crossfire was completed last December, edited by the publisher, Rough Edges Press, over the holidays, and launched in January 2016.
Oh, and that first novel finally came out in November 2015. It’s titled Spyfall and is part of a second series of private eye novels, featuring a different detective, Stan Wade, LAPI. Spyfall was also written and sold early last year and saw print in November 2015. The second volume in this series, Starfall, will come out in February 2016, with several additional entries later in the year.
In both cases, the books have been fully edited and packaged by the publishers. The main difference is the speed of delivery to the readers. In this era of “binge-watching” TV series, it appears that readers want more of an immersive reading experience.
By the time Killer Nashville 2016 rolls around, I should have a good handle on which publication cycle the readers prefer. Perhaps it doesn’t matter so much how long it takes to get a book written, as how quickly the book can be offered for public enjoyment.
Born and raised in the heart of the heartland, Columbus, Ohio, John Hegenberger is the author of several series: Stan Wade LAPI in 1959, Eliot Cross Columbus-based PI in 1988, and Ace Hart, western gambler in Arizona in 1873. He’s a father of three, tennis enthusiast, collector of silent films and OTR, hiker, Francophile, B.A. Comparative Lit., pop culture author, ex-Navy, ex-marketing exec at Exxon, AT&T, and IBM, and happily married for 45 years and counting. He is also an active member of SFWA, PWA and ITW. Find more of John’s work at www.johnhegenberger.com
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
Speed Writing To Keep Up With Speed Readers / John Hegenberger
The immediacy of the Internet has conditioned us to expect instant gratification. We’re so far past the days of dial-up that if a page takes more than two seconds to load, we check to see if our Wi-Fi is down. This gets us in trouble when we have to face a long-term project as ponderous as traditional publishing can be. What if I want my book to be available now? This week’s guest blogger John Hegenberger has used both self-publishing and traditional publishing to get his stories out there, and shares on the perks and pitfalls of each.Happy reading!Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
Speed Writing To Keep Up With Speed Readers
By John Hegenberger
The book publishing process is changing and accelerating.
A reader once asked me, “How long does it take to publish a book?”
Thirty years? Three years? Three months? Three days? Three hours?
For me, when I recently published Cross Examinations, a collection of short private eye stories, the answer was all the above.
I wrote the first draft back in 1988, which is still the setting for the tales today. Not long after, I encountered a series of personal needs involving my family and friends and found it best to put the manuscript into a drawer and build a career that assured us all a steady income. It all worked out beautifully, because about 27 years later with a career completed and three children grown, I was nearing retirement and it was time to reopen that drawer.
Thus, in 2012, I entered a whole new world of electronic publishing. The book went through a rewrite, along with several other manuscripts. And I began writing daily again and created another book; a novel, this time. And then an additional novel for a whole new PI series that I wanted to have published.
After approximately three months of searching, I found a publisher for the first novel. Ah, but then I was faced with the prospect of waiting another eight to ten-months while the editing and publishing process advanced. That seemed like forever.
I wanted to do something progressive in the meantime. So, having heard about this thing called self-publishing, I decided to give it a try with the short story collection while I waited for the novel to come out.
Again, I worked through three weeks of rewrites and polishes to create the content of Cross Examinations.
But then came the daunting task of learning to properly format and post an eBook. After another three days of poking around, reading up, and watching various videos, I pressed the Send button and launched my book into the world.
Next came the agonizing three-hour wait before the book became fully available on the website.
Finally, success was mine!
So, as you can see, the process contains many stages, but at each step along the way, I knew I was getting closer to the fulfillment of my dream. Looking back, it doesn’t seem to have been all that long, after all. I’m happy I took the time and I learned a lot from the process and quite a bit about marketing, too.
In fact, I now have two sequels out for Cross Examinations: Crossfire and Tripl3 Cross. Crossfire was completed last December, edited by the publisher, Rough Edges Press, over the holidays, and launched in January 2016.
Oh, and that first novel finally came out in November 2015. It’s titled Spyfall and is part of a second series of private eye novels, featuring a different detective, Stan Wade, LAPI. Spyfall was also written and sold early last year and saw print in November 2015. The second volume in this series, Starfall, will come out in February 2016, with several additional entries later in the year.
In both cases, the books have been fully edited and packaged by the publishers. The main difference is the speed of delivery to the readers. In this era of “binge-watching” TV series, it appears that readers want more of an immersive reading experience.
By the time Killer Nashville 2016 rolls around, I should have a good handle on which publication cycle the readers prefer. Perhaps it doesn’t matter so much how long it takes to get a book written, as how quickly the book can be offered for public enjoyment.
Born and raised in the heart of the heartland, Columbus, Ohio, John Hegenberger is the author of several series: Stan Wade LAPI in 1959, Eliot Cross Columbus-based PI in 1988, and Ace Hart, western gambler in Arizona in 1873. He’s a father of three, tennis enthusiast, collector of silent films and OTR, hiker, Francophile, B.A. Comparative Lit., pop culture author, ex-Navy, ex-marketing exec at Exxon, AT&T, and IBM, and happily married for 45 years and counting. He is also an active member of SFWA, PWA and ITW. Find more of John’s work at www.johnhegenberger.com
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
A Shrink with Ink / Ellen Kirschman
It’s important as readers and writers that the fictional world we enter seems real. We don’t know why, necessarily, but we can’t invest ourselves in a story that doesn’t somehow feel true. In this week’s guest blog, writer and psychologist Ellen Kirschman divulges some of her methods for creating a police procedural thriller or mystery that gives the audience that elusive, essential foundation of believability.
Happy reading!
Clay Stafford
Founder Killer Nashville
Publisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
A Shrink With Ink
By Ellen Kirschman
I’m a police psychologist and the author of three non-fiction books. A few years ago, I decided to try writing fiction. As an avid reader and mystery fan, I have often felt that novelists come closer to the truth of human experience than many psychologists do. And, to be frank, I was tired of doing research. I actually thought it would be easier to make stuff up.
I was, as I soon found out, delusional.
The challenge of writing non-fiction is getting the facts right and presenting them in an understandable, readable package. Fiction requires the writer to capture the reader’s imagination. Get her to care so much about the story and the characters that she’ll bare her teeth at anyone, or anything, that interrupts her before she finishes the book. Non-fiction readers can and do pick up a book and put it down again at will.
My first “aha” moment as a fledging novelist came when I changed from third to first person point of view. My protagonist, Dr. Dot Meyerhoff, is also a police psychologist, though she is thinner and younger than I am. (And in possession of skills I never developed, such as breaking and entering, and assault with a deadly weapon.) Once I put myself in Dot’s shoes, as a woman and a civilian working in a male-dominated profession, where both are sometimes treated as second-class citizens, I was in familiar territory.
My goal is to write mysteries that both capture the imagination and reveal something I know to be true about psychology and about police work. For example, my first mystery, Burying Ben, looks at police suicide. Most people don’t know that cops are two to three times as likely to kill themselves as they are to be killed in the line of duty. I’ve always wondered how I would feel if one of my clients took his own life. Or how much worse it would be if, as it happens to Dot, the officer left a note blaming me.
My second book, The Right Wrong Thing(October 2015), drills down into the contemporary debate over police community relations. A young officer shoots and kills an unarmed, pregnant teenager. The officer, who suffers from PTSD, is determined to apologize to the dead girl’s family, despite everyone’s efforts to stop her. The results are catastrophic. Dot, ignoring orders from the police chief to back off, enlists some unlikely allies and unconventional undercover work to expose the tangled path of her client’s disastrous journey.
Readers ask me if my books are inspired by actual events. The answer is yes and no. There is truth in both my mysteries, real things that happened to real people. But the stories are embellished, disguised, and blended so that they are unrecognizable to the people who lived them. For years I’ve been keeping a file folder of the funny, off-the-wall things cops say. Officer Eddie Rimbauer, Dot’s occasional and troubled ally, is a composite of many people I know. He sounds so real, though, that there was an online pool of cops competing to guess his real identity.
If you’re writing fiction and want to get the details right, you don’t have to have a Ph.D or spend thirty years counseling cops. You could attend a citizens’ police academy at your local PD for hands-on experience, for example.
Go on a ride-along. After all these years I still learn something new every time I do. Learn about guns. Practice on the range. Try your hand at a firearms training simulator (FATS).
If you're qualified and have the time to invest, think about becoming a reserve officer. Whatever you do, don’t watch cop shows on television. Most are so over the top, real cops can only laugh at them.
Read widely. My books I Love a Cop,I Love a Fire Fighter, and Counseling Cops all contain real-life scenarios that can enhance your stories and deepen your characters, as does Sergeant Adam Plantinga’s highly readable book, 400 Things Cops Know: Street-Smart Lessons from a Veteran Patrolman (2015 Silver Falchion Award winner for Best Nonfiction Crime Reference).
Ellen Kirschman, Ph.D, is a clinical psychologist in independent practice. She is a member of the International Association of Chiefs of Police, the Society for the Study of Police and Criminal Psychology, the American Psychological Association, and the International Association of Women in Law Enforcement. She is the recipient of the California Psychological Association’s 2014 award for distinguished contribution to psychology as well as the American Psychological Association’s 2010 award for outstanding contribution to the practice of police and public safety psychology.
Ellen is the author of the award-winning I Love a Cop: What Police Families Need to Know, I Love a Fire Fighter: What the Family Needs to Know, and lead author of Counseling Cops: What Clinicians Need to Know (2013). Her debut novel, Burying Ben: A Dot Meyerhoff Mystery (2013) is about police suicide told from the perspective of the psychologist. Ellen and her husband live in Redwood City, Calif. Reach her at ellenkirschman.com
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
A Shrink with Ink / Ellen Kirschman
It’s important as readers and writers that the fictional world we enter seems real. We don’t know why, necessarily, but we can’t invest ourselves in a story that doesn’t somehow feel true. In this week’s guest blog, writer and psychologist Ellen Kirschman divulges some of her methods for creating a police procedural thriller or mystery that gives the audience that elusive, essential foundation of believability.Happy reading!Clay StaffordFounder Killer NashvillePublisher / Editorial Director Killer Nashville Magazine
A Shrink With Ink
By Ellen Kirschman
I’m a police psychologist and the author of three non-fiction books. A few years ago, I decided to try writing fiction. As an avid reader and mystery fan, I have often felt that novelists come closer to the truth of human experience than many psychologists do. And, to be frank, I was tired of doing research. I actually thought it would be easier to make stuff up.
I was, as I soon found out, delusional.
The challenge of writing non-fiction is getting the facts right and presenting them in an understandable, readable package. Fiction requires the writer to capture the reader’s imagination. Get her to care so much about the story and the characters that she’ll bare her teeth at anyone, or anything, that interrupts her before she finishes the book. Non-fiction readers can and do pick up a book and put it down again at will.
My first “aha” moment as a fledging novelist came when I changed from third to first person point of view. My protagonist, Dr. Dot Meyerhoff, is also a police psychologist, though she is thinner and younger than I am. (And in possession of skills I never developed, such as breaking and entering, and assault with a deadly weapon.) Once I put myself in Dot’s shoes, as a woman and a civilian working in a male-dominated profession, where both are sometimes treated as second-class citizens, I was in familiar territory.
My goal is to write mysteries that both capture the imagination and reveal something I know to be true about psychology and about police work. For example, my first mystery, Burying Ben, looks at police suicide. Most people don’t know that cops are two to three times as likely to kill themselves as they are to be killed in the line of duty. I’ve always wondered how I would feel if one of my clients took his own life. Or how much worse it would be if, as it happens to Dot, the officer left a note blaming me.
My second book, The Right Wrong Thing (October 2015), drills down into the contemporary debate over police community relations. A young officer shoots and kills an unarmed, pregnant teenager. The officer, who suffers from PTSD, is determined to apologize to the dead girl’s family, despite everyone’s efforts to stop her. The results are catastrophic. Dot, ignoring orders from the police chief to back off, enlists some unlikely allies and unconventional undercover work to expose the tangled path of her client’s disastrous journey.
Readers ask me if my books are inspired by actual events. The answer is yes and no. There is truth in both my mysteries, real things that happened to real people. But the stories are embellished, disguised, and blended so that they are unrecognizable to the people who lived them. For years I’ve been keeping a file folder of the funny, off-the-wall things cops say. Officer Eddie Rimbauer, Dot’s occasional and troubled ally, is a composite of many people I know. He sounds so real, though, that there was an online pool of cops competing to guess his real identity.
If you’re writing fiction and want to get the details right, you don’t have to have a Ph.D or spend thirty years counseling cops. You could attend a citizens’ police academy at your local PD for hands-on experience, for example.
Go on a ride-along. After all these years I still learn something new every time I do. Learn about guns. Practice on the range. Try your hand at a firearms training simulator (FATS).
If you're qualified and have the time to invest, think about becoming a reserve officer. Whatever you do, don’t watch cop shows on television. Most are so over the top, real cops can only laugh at them.
Read widely. My books I Love a Cop, I Love a Fire Fighter, and Counseling Cops all contain real-life scenarios that can enhance your stories and deepen your characters, as does Sergeant Adam Plantinga’s highly readable book, 400 Things Cops Know: Street-Smart Lessons from a Veteran Patrolman (2015 Silver Falchion Award winner for Best Nonfiction Crime Reference).
Ellen Kirschman, Ph.D, is a clinical psychologist in independent practice. She is a member of the International Association of Chiefs of Police, the Society for the Study of Police and Criminal Psychology, the American Psychological Association, and the International Association of Women in Law Enforcement. She is the recipient of the California Psychological Association’s 2014 award for distinguished contribution to psychology as well as the American Psychological Association’s 2010 award for outstanding contribution to the practice of police and public safety psychology.
Ellen is the author of the award-winning I Love a Cop: What Police Families Need to Know, I Love a Fire Fighter: What the Family Needs to Know, and lead author of Counseling Cops: What Clinicians Need to Know (2013). Her debut novel, Burying Ben: A Dot Meyerhoff Mystery (2013) is about police suicide told from the perspective of the psychologist. Ellen and her husband live in Redwood City, Calif. Reach her at ellenkirschman.com
(To be a part of the Killer Nashville Guest Blog, send a query to contact@killernashville.com. We’d love to hear from you.)
Thanks to Tom Wood, Emily Eytchison, and publisher/editorial director Clay Stafford for their assistance in putting together this week’s blog.
For more writer resources, visit us at www.KillerNashville.com, www.KillerNashvilleMagazine.com, and www.KillerNashvilleBookCon.com.
And be sure to check out our new book, Killer Nashville Noir: Cold-Blooded, an anthology of original short stories by New York Times bestselling authors and newbies alike.
*Killer Nashville is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program. If you purchase a book from the links on this page, Amazon will give Killer Nashville a small percentage of the total sale. Killer Nashville receives zero compensation (other than sometimes the book to review) from publishers who have been selected for the Book of the Day.
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